The Disciples Close To Finished

From the feedback that we received from our peers, we all decided collectively as a group to discard the last scene of the interview which included myself and Melanie in it as people felt like it did not fit in with our opening scene. So therefore we decided to add two different scenes of myself and Connor doing voice overs to various shots of us. I decided to juxtapose Connor's serious tone with a funny, more uplifting tone as we needed to add an element of comedy as we did not have it yet. So in changing all of these shots, the structure and line up of our previous opening scene had changed, which i believes makes it less of a trailer looking scene and more of an opening sequence. We still have a few bits to add in still, such as Connors interview and myself and Connor singing when we was a duet.

First Draft - The Disciples

Today myself, Connor and Melanie showed our class the first draft of our film. Taking into account that it was not entirely finished with editing and i did not like the ending shot of the interview as i felt it did not look as good as the rest of the opening sequence, i felt it did not flow and fit in with the rest of our film as it just appeared out of nowhere. We felt we did not have enough time to make it perfect, we were happy with the outcome but we will still be making a few changes and alterations.