The Disciples Close To Finished

From the feedback that we received from our peers, we all decided collectively as a group to discard the last scene of the interview which included myself and Melanie in it as people felt like it did not fit in with our opening scene. So therefore we decided to add two different scenes of myself and Connor doing voice overs to various shots of us. I decided to juxtapose Connor's serious tone with a funny, more uplifting tone as we needed to add an element of comedy as we did not have it yet. So in changing all of these shots, the structure and line up of our previous opening scene had changed, which i believes makes it less of a trailer looking scene and more of an opening sequence. We still have a few bits to add in still, such as Connors interview and myself and Connor singing when we was a duet.